This is my first attempt at writing poetry, well not for a cl. Its about my mindset as time progresses...?

The metaphors are nice, especially how you signed it as "Me of Then (12:33 AM 12/4/10. edited at 5:22AM 12/4/10)" which was really clever. Its like you are reading a poem for you memory, which you are but u let us know that. Good stuff. Keep it up